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Burning Bridges.

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Her voice is as soft as ashes and he

can hear the sound of her heart burning.

"When will you be back?" she asks, and he

does not answer, cannot answer. Not yet.

"When it is finished," he finally says.

He turns to leave, and fancies that he can smell her

woodsmoke tears, the scent following him

in a silent rebuke.
This idea just sort of popped into my head. I don't know why. Criticism/comments greatly appreciated!
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I really like this :)